Wednesday, October 6, 2010

air pollutions_draft_





Air is the natural mixture of gases that surround the earth.It is made of 79% nitrogen, 20% oxygen, and 1% other gases,so air quality is important because we can`t avoid breathing in the air around us.but as the fast increase in air, water,and soil pollution in egypt has become a real threat to the people`s health


air pollution is known as a substance in the air that can cause harm to humans and the environment.it can be classified as primary pollution and secondary one.usually primary pollution is a result of process such as ash from a volcanic eruption, or gas from a motor vehicle or factories ...etc.secondary one is form in the air when primary pollutions react or interact an example of it is the ground level ozone.


there are many reasons of air pollution .first,the human bieng is the only one who is reasbonsible of all the pollution he is the one who invent and usewhat he invent in a bad way.second.development especially in technology an example of it is the mobile network which are put on the roof of the houses .third,the bad use of the natural resources,the bad use of it lead to air pollution as he cut trees which give us oxogyen also the burning of rubbish in streets pollute the air .fourth,over population it leads to spread the diseases fifth, the heavy use of pesticides also smoking, ash from volcanic eruptions,mining operations and firecrackers.


we can`t avoid breathing the air around us even if it is polluted. so the air air pollution causes difficulty to breath ,it also effect on the growth of planets which give us a clean air.,the inrease of using things that polluted air makes the ozone layer more thin which is considered a global warning,also the chemicals in the air transfer directly or indirectly to our lungs it may causes diseases.and another problems in our nose.it also effect on the people`s mood at work .,avoid smoking, ,Save energy- we should Try
to use minimum amounts of natural gas and even electricity
.. Whenever possible, avoid the use of air conditioner and use a fan instead,. Always buy recycled products., Reuse things such as paper and plastic bags, paper etc. This will contribute a lot towards reducing the effects of air pollution and global warming. Avoid the use of firecrackers. we don’t really need it to express our
we should breath a pure air this will happen with our cooperations to each others.we should Always keep our car tuned properly so that it remains in a good condition
feeling of happiness. and finally we should planet trees.





to sum up , as a human we need to breath a pure air without any difficulty to obstacle us from going on at work. this will happen if we know the dander of breathing a polluted air.

7 comments:

  1. 1.The pictures you used are very expressive. I liked them very much.
    2.Your content is sufficient.
    3.Your organization is good
    But take care of the following:
    1.Change the font and the bold feature of the draft the bolding made the draft difficult to be read.
    2.Some words are misspelled (such as: being, reasbonsible…etc) try to correct all the misspelled words in the coming draft.
    3.Take care of capitalization, some words at the beginning of sentences are not capitalized

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  2. excellent essay elham
    go ahead and write more

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  3. hey ya elham...nice essay ya gamel...keep going :)

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  4. Nice essay Elham . I hope all the best to you in shaa Allah.

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  5. Lohloh, please change the font and the colour .but it seems good

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  6. thanks alot elham for your comment
    and i make the vocabulary in my eassy clearer
    you can re-read it now and understand every word
    i am waiting for your comment on my new one

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  7. congratulation lohlty,very interesting essay but take care of misspelled and capitalization go ahead

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