first draft about my dream job

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Every one has his dream job.some people exactly know what they want to be and how but others don`t.
it is important to determine what is your dream job is?so i choose to be a tourist guide as it is a wonderful job which provides assistance, information and cultural, historical and
contemporary heritage interpretation to people on organized tours, individual clients, educational establishments, at historical sites and museums.
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Being a tourist guide is my dream job as it will give me the opportunity to network with other people from different lifes, cultures, and nationalities.also it will help me to improve my communication skills and to travel for free.another reason to choose this job that i will earn too tips not subjected to tax.another important reason that it will let me represent my country and i will be proud to share history. i will be an unofficial representative.

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I think alot to find a disadvantage of this job but i didn`t find. the only one may be the routine daily of speech, routes and locations.

To sum up,every one should determine what is his options to reach his dream ,so i should do my best to be a tourist guide.

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outline*** my dream job

                             my dream job

                                                                                                  


             introduction
every one has his dream job.some people exactly know what they want to be and how but others don`t.


                        body


i always dream to be a tourist`s guide
why i choose this job to be my dream job?
the disadvantages of this job




                          conclusion


i should do my best to be a tourist guide

final draft _ educational system in egypt

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The egyptian educational system is divided into pre school education, basic education ,preparatory stage, secondary education and post secondary education.

Pre school education It is a stage that comes prior to basic education for the children aged 4 to 6 years old. School age children are not accepted in this stage which aims at comprehensive and integrated development for each child; taken into consideration individual differences. It aims also at preparing the child for regular school life in basic education, the age of entry to basic educational system stage is 6 and the age of entry is 14.in this stage the student gain a little information about the external environment around him and a little academic information which may help him in understanding his world.



Education in Egypt is available to every one .public primary and secondary schools are free for every one .they only pay registration fees,there is tuition as teachers don`t do their jobs at schools. Public Higher education is free and also available to every one. Students only pay registration fees. Private education is much more expensive ,but most parents prefer to enter their children private collogues ,because of its several options , unlike public collogue with its poor options.







Most students aren`t interested in their studies and future jobs ,because the educational system insist on the theoretical not practical studies.so many students work in another career to gain money ,so the education become independent from the real life .you should have a paper that prove you are a higher educational graduates no matter what you obtain from 19 years learning or more , so our educational system need a reformation to attract the students to its content also the teacher need to refresh and search for a new styles of learning.



To sum up, the educational system in our country need to reformation to suitable the high development of technology. We waste our time in learning materials that we will not use it in our practical life

first draft) educational system in egypt)

note:

On the left: "Education in Egypt", and the poor thinker is

memorizing 20 centuries-old poetry about 'tribal supremacy

and pride' from the 'official study book'

on the right

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the creativity and thinking it does not need my explanation!

The egyptian educational system is divided into pre school education, basic education ,preparatory stage, secondary education and post secondary education.

Pre school education It is a stage that comes prior to basic education for the children aged 4 to 6 years old. School age children are not accepted in this stage which aims at comprehensive and integrated development for each child; taken into consideration individual differences. It aims also at preparing the child for regular school life in basic education, the age of entry to basic educational system stage is 6 and the age of entry is 14.in this stage the student gain a little information about the external environment around him and a little academic information which may help him in understanding his world.



Education in Egypt is available to every one .public primary and secondary schools are free for every one .they only pay registration fees,there is tuition as teachers don`t do their jobs at schools. Public Higher education is free and also available to every one. Students only pay registration fees. Private education is much more expensive ,but most parents prefer to enter their children private collogues ,because of its several options , unlike public collogue with its poor options.







Most students aren`t interested in their studies and future jobs ,because the educational system insist on the theoretical not practical studies.so many students work in another career to gain money ,so the education become independent from the real life .you should have a paper that prove you are a higher educational graduates no matter what you obtain from 19 years learning or more , so our educational system need a reformation to attract the students to its content also the teacher need to refresh and search for a new styles of learning.



To sum up, the educational system in our country need to reformation to suitable the high development of technology. We waste our time in learning materials that we will not use it in our practical life

outline_ educational system in egypt

introduction

      

every country has its own eductional system

body

educational system in egypt

public and private education

reformation to our educational system

conclusion

our educational system isn`t appropriate the high technology

final draft_:_ foreign schools

           Education is a vital component in shaping one`s identity,.so choosing whether to send your childern to a foreign school or a public one is an important decision especially in those days as the education is in backwardness status.

          The final decision of most parents is to send their children to foreign schools because of the high standards of education there.another reason is their social class which force them to send their children to it,the influently of their foreign language as they use a foreign language in teaching,and the wide use of educational material like book ,audio and cds.

         Unlike those parents ,the others prefer to send their children to a public  schools  because of the lower cost of it despite the backwardness  because of the lower cost of it compared to forein school . also as the foreign schools affect in their children`s  arabic languague,history of their country as  this schools are operated by foreign authorities who implement their objectives ,and  they also taught  them the american`s history from their perspective as the student`s cultural identity isn`t yet performed. yet so they are taught western morals and values.

      I am with the positive things which the foreign school present to our generation but against their attempt to make them feel unbelonging of their country . the foreign schools teach them that their countr is underdeveloped so they feel that they are culturally inferiors.as a result of that the graduates of these schools grow up hating their cultures , traditions and history.so we should reform our public schools to be similar to foreign schools in standard of education.

foreign schools O_O first draft

education is a vital component in shaping one`s identity.so choosing whether to send your childern to a foreign school or a public one is an important decision especially in those days as the education is in backwardness status.

the final decision of most parents is to send their children to foreign schools because of the high standards of education there,another reason is their social class which force them to send their children to it,the influently of their foreign language as they use a foreign language in teaching,and the wide use of educational material like book ,audio and cds.

unlike those parents the others prefer send their children to a public  schools  because of the lower cost of it despite the backwardness but the foreign schools will cost them a lot . also as the foreign schools affect in their children`s  arabic languague,history of their country as  this schools are operated by foreign authorities who implement their objectives ,and  they also taught  them the american`s history from their perspective as the student`s cultural identity isn`t yet performed. yet so they are taught western morals and values.

i am with the positive things which the foreign school present to our generation but against their attempt to make them feel unbelonging of their country . the foreign schools teach them that their countr is underdeveloped so they feel that they are culturally inferior.as a result of that the graduates of these schools grow up hating their cultures , traditions and history.so we should reform our public schools to be similar to foreign schools in standard of education.

foreign schools outline

introduction

 education is a vital component in our life 

body

     why most parents send their children to a foreign school?

• standards of education
• social reasons
•  educational material

   why the others people refuse to send their children to foreign schools?

• it affect the arabic language
• destroy our history
• operated by forein authorities
• learn them western morals and values
• have no blonging and no identity

conclusion

i`m with public schools if it behave like foreign schools

 

{:whether Women should accept her husband punishment or not ? { outline

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introduction

 woman`s role in life 

women right to be valued 

although  woman do all her domestic duties, her husband treats her in a sheepish manner

Body

I think the real reasons of this punishment

• Alcholoism
• Domestic abuse  was  part of most men`s histories
• Missing healthy relationship skills
• The idololgy of the whole community that has a lot of misconceptions rooted in it - keeping silent as a reaction
•  cultural reasons

cases of man`s punishment

counter opinion

Most of people especially negative ones  find that woman has never needed to stands up to her husband

Their reasons

the man is the dominated person in every woman`s life

• Her husband may  threat s her to harm her children if she leaves
• The traditions give him the opportunitiy to do that
• Her mother endured an abusive relationship too
• She had any other options
• The expensive court proceeding of divorce
• Economic reasons

Conclusion

Being married meaning that you will be respected, loved and happy  .every woman  should say no to punishment as she is a human being she    

should be respected

final draft~_~ Air Poulltion

 Air is the natural mixture of gases that surround the earth.It is made of 79% nitrogen, 20% oxygen, and 1% other gases,so air quality is important because we can`t avoid breathing in the air around us.but as the fast increase in air, water,and soil pollution in egypt has become a real threat to the people`s health

Air pollution is known as a substance in the air that can cause harm to humans and the environment.it can be classified as primary pollution and secondary one.usually primary pollution is a result of process such as ash from a volcanic eruption, or gas from a motor vehicle or factories ...etc.secondary one is form in the air when primary pollutions react or interact an example of it is the ground level ozone.


There are many reasons of air pollution .first,the human being is the only one who is reasbonsible of all the pollution he is the one who invent and usewhat he invent in a bad way.second.development especially in technology an example of it is the mobile network which are put on the roof of the houses .third,the bad use of the natural resources,the bad use of it lead to air pollution as he cut trees which give us oxogyen also the burning of rubbish in streets pollute the air .fourth,over population it leads to spread the diseases fifth, the heavy use of pesticides also smoking, ash from volcanic eruptions,mining operations and firecrackers.


We can`t avoid breathing the air around us even if it is polluted. so the air air pollution causes difficulty to breath ,it also effect on the growth of planets which give us a clean air.,the inrease of using things that polluted air makes the ozone layer more thin which is considered a global warning,also the chemicals in the air transfer directly or indirectly to our lungs it may causes diseases.and another problems in our nose.it also effect on the people`s mood at work .,avoid smoking, ,Save energy- we should Try
to use minimum amounts of natural gas and even electricity
.. Whenever possible, avoid the use of air conditioner and use a fan instead,. Always buy recycled products., Reuse things such as paper and plastic bags, paper etc. This will contribute a lot towards reducing the effects of air pollution and global warming. Avoid the use of firecrackers. we don’t really need it to express our
we should breath a pure air this will happen with our cooperations to each others.we should Always keep our car tuned properly so that it remains in a good condition
feeling of happiness. and finally we should planet trees.





To sum up , as a human we need to breath a pure air without any difficulty to obstacle us from going on at work. this will happen if we know the dander of breathing a polluted air.

air pollutions_draft_

Air is the natural mixture of gases that surround the earth.It is made of 79% nitrogen, 20% oxygen, and 1% other gases,so air quality is important because we can`t avoid breathing in the air around us.but as the fast increase in air, water,and soil pollution in egypt has become a real threat to the people`s health


air pollution is known as a substance in the air that can cause harm to humans and the environment.it can be classified as primary pollution and secondary one.usually primary pollution is a result of process such as ash from a volcanic eruption, or gas from a motor vehicle or factories ...etc.secondary one is form in the air when primary pollutions react or interact an example of it is the ground level ozone.


there are many reasons of air pollution .first,the human bieng is the only one who is reasbonsible of all the pollution he is the one who invent and usewhat he invent in a bad way.second.development especially in technology an example of it is the mobile network which are put on the roof of the houses .third,the bad use of the natural resources,the bad use of it lead to air pollution as he cut trees which give us oxogyen also the burning of rubbish in streets pollute the air .fourth,over population it leads to spread the diseases fifth, the heavy use of pesticides also smoking, ash from volcanic eruptions,mining operations and firecrackers.


we can`t avoid breathing the air around us even if it is polluted. so the air air pollution causes difficulty to breath ,it also effect on the growth of planets which give us a clean air.,the inrease of using things that polluted air makes the ozone layer more thin which is considered a global warning,also the chemicals in the air transfer directly or indirectly to our lungs it may causes diseases.and another problems in our nose.it also effect on the people`s mood at work .,avoid smoking, ,Save energy- we should Try
to use minimum amounts of natural gas and even electricity
.. Whenever possible, avoid the use of air conditioner and use a fan instead,. Always buy recycled products., Reuse things such as paper and plastic bags, paper etc. This will contribute a lot towards reducing the effects of air pollution and global warming. Avoid the use of firecrackers. we don’t really need it to express our
we should breath a pure air this will happen with our cooperations to each others.we should Always keep our car tuned properly so that it remains in a good condition
feeling of happiness. and finally we should planet trees.





to sum up , as a human we need to breath a pure air without any difficulty to obstacle us from going on at work. this will happen if we know the dander of breathing a polluted air.

pollution@outline@

• what is meant by pollution
• pollution is classified to primary and secondary pollution
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• reasons of polllution

1-air pollution tside

bad use of the natural resources

over population

factories

gas of cars and motors

burning rubbish in streets

ash from volcanic eruptions

pesticides

pertoleum refineries

smoking

mining operations

firecrackers

2- air pollution inside

people who use coal to run their furnace

sprays \

• how can air pollution affect us

difficulty to breath

effect on the growth of planets

it makes the ozone layer more thin and it considered a global warning

chemicals in the air transfer directly or indirectly to you lungs

it causes cancer and proplems in our nose

solution of air pollution

Always keep our car tuned properly so that it remains in a good condition.

Save energy- Try to use minimum amounts of natural gas and even electricity. Whenever possible, avoid the use of air conditioner and use a fan instead.

Always buy recycled products.

Reuse things such as paper and plastic bags, paper etc. This will contribute a lot towards reducing the effects of air pollution and global warming.

Avoid the use of firecrackers. You don’t really need it to express your feeling of happiness.

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I'm elham farag soliman 4th year in Suez Canal
 University in Suez Faculty of Education English department This blog is created for presenting assignments of critical reading and writing